Saturday, February 11, 2012


INDUSTRALIZATION IS THE BACKBONE OF ANY ECONOMY. BUT SOME CLAIMS THAT INDUSTRALIZATION ALSO RESULTS IN REGIONAL DISPARITY. DO YOU ABREE OR DISAGREE WITH THE STATEMENT.GIVE REASONS TO SUBSTANTIATE YOUR OPINION.



Growth of a country depends on its economy which is constituted by many factors. Industrialization is one of the components which shape the economy of any nation. In the current scenario, it is encompassed by Globalization, Privatization and Liberalization which are inevitable to promote good and rapid economical growth. Some people on the contrary have the opinion that this promotes regional inequality.

                                        The term Industrialization signifies the birth and growth of industries in any premises with the support of the government or any other institution. It brings a total alteration in the society. It augments regional growth by providing more employment opportunities, better amenities and standard of living to the local people. The reputation and popularity acquired by china among the world nations is literally the result of Industrialization. I don’t think there is any contradiction or contention in the statement that Industrialization promotes economical growth.

                                                 Industrialization is obviously the cradle for economic growth. On the contrary we have to accept the reality that it also brings regional imbalance and disparity. Urbanization is the direct impact of this. We see a spur in the growth of cities. People tend to reside in cities because of better job opportunities and amenities. Today we see that development and industrialization is just confined to cities. The growth of village has stagnated due to rapid development in cities, deliberately ignoring the village people. This leads to grave consequences like stagnation of economy and stricken poverty. Every nation has to contemplate on this issue and should bring a positive change.

                       Ghandhiji stated that the heart of India lies in villages. We can strive an overall development of India by peeling off the regional disparity. We can bridge the gap between the have and the have-nots by focusing on overall promotion of industrialization everywhere.


Why this answer a perfect and precise one.
                  
                                  

·         It is a relevant subject.
·         Explanation is given  in a logic manner
·         Each paragraph highlights specific issues.
·         Vocabulary is of an academic standard.
·         Examples, reasons and remedial measures have manifested well.
·         The topic promotes arguments and contentions.



Analyzing paragraph 1 :


Growth of a country depends on its economy which is constituted by many factors. Industrialization is one of the components which shape the economy of any nation. In the current scenario, it is encompassed by Globalization, Privatization and Liberalization which are inevitable to promote good and rapid economical growth. Some people on the contrary have the opinion that this promotes regional inequality

                                        
Notes:
·         The paragraph is brief and precisely defines the topic.
·         We see an argument in the first paragraph itself.
·         Paragraph reflects the whole topic.
·         The reader is introduced to both sides of the argument.






    Analyzing paragraph 2:

The term Industrialization signifies the birth and growth of industries in any premises with the support of the government or any other institution. It brings a total alteration in the society. It augments regional growth by providing more employment opportunities, better amenities and standard of living to the local people. The reputation and popularity acquired by china among the world nations is literally the result o f Industrialization. I don’t think there is any contradiction or contention in the statement that Industrialization promotes economical growth.


Notes:
·         This paragraph clearly defines the term ‘Industrialization’
·         It clearly underlines the writer’s opinion.
·         Perfect example is given to vindicate the writers argument.( The reputation and popularity acquired by china.)
·         The writer support his claims by citing reasons……( providing more employment opportunities, better amenities etc.)









Analysing paragraph 3:


    Industrialization is obviously the cradle for economic growth. On the contrary we have to accept the reality that it also brings regional imbalance and disparity. Urbanization is the direct impact of this. We see a spur in the growth of cities. People tend to reside in cities because of better job opportunities and amenities. Today we see that development and industrialization is just confined to cities. The growth of village has stagnated due to rapid development in cities, deliberately ignoring the village people. This leads to grave consequences like stagnation of economy and stricken poverty. Every nation has to contemplate on this issue and should bring a positive change.



Notes:  
·         The flow of idea changes in this paragraph.
·         Here the writer probes into another different aspect of the topic.
·         He tries to bring a comprehensive idea of the topic.
·         He also admits the claim raised by some section of the society that ….(Urbanization and growth of cities  as adverse impact of industrialization)





Analyzing paragraph 4 :


Ghandhiji stated that the heart of India lies in villages. We can strive an overall development of India by peeling off the regional disparity. We can bridge the gap between the have and the have-nots by focusing on overall promotion of industrialization everywhere.

        


Notes:
·         Here the writer gives solutions to balance the arguments.
·         Final paragraph gives a comprehensive outlook with respect to the topic
·         The word count is around 270 which is good.





How I Developed This Answer
                                                (Time Taken:10 minutes)



Introduction

·         I read the question and identified the key issues.

·         I focused on the key words like Industrialization and Regional Disparity

·         I contemplated on the controversy in this topic.




Argument For:

                        The first and the most relevant idea that I conceived with regard to the topic is that, Industrialization is very vital for the promotion of any economy. It is an absolute right statement .We can’t anticipate progress without the process of industrialization.


I would write the following summary notes on the test booklet:



·         Economical growth

·         Job opportunities

·         Better amenities



Arguments Against


One of the ideas that came in to my mind is obviously economical disparity. Although Industrialization promotes economy, regional imbalance and Urbanization are the direct result of this.


I would write the following summary notes on the test booklet:


  • Urbanization

  • Regional imbalance

  • Stagnation of economy.





Conclusion:

 I tried to bring a balance between arguments for and against Industrialization and brought a view that industrialization is very necessary.


  • Bridge the gap
  • Overall promotion of industralisation

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