INDUSTRALIZATION IS THE BACKBONE OF ANY ECONOMY. BUT
SOME CLAIMS THAT INDUSTRALIZATION ALSO RESULTS IN REGIONAL DISPARITY. DO YOU
ABREE OR DISAGREE WITH THE STATEMENT.GIVE REASONS TO SUBSTANTIATE YOUR OPINION.
Growth of a country depends on its
economy which is constituted by many factors. Industrialization is one of the
components which shape the economy of any nation. In the current scenario, it
is encompassed by Globalization, Privatization and Liberalization which are inevitable
to promote good and rapid economical growth. Some people on the contrary have
the opinion that this promotes regional inequality.
The
term Industrialization signifies the birth and growth of industries in any
premises with the support of the government or any other institution. It brings
a total alteration in the society. It augments regional growth by providing
more employment opportunities, better amenities and standard of living to the
local people. The reputation and popularity acquired by china among the world
nations is literally the result of Industrialization. I don’t think there is
any contradiction or contention in the statement that Industrialization
promotes economical growth.
Industrialization is obviously the cradle for
economic growth. On the contrary we have to accept the reality that it also
brings regional imbalance and disparity. Urbanization is the direct impact of
this. We see a spur in the growth of cities. People tend to reside in cities
because of better job opportunities and amenities. Today we see that
development and industrialization is just confined to cities. The growth of
village has stagnated due to rapid development in cities, deliberately ignoring
the village people. This leads to grave consequences like stagnation of economy
and stricken poverty. Every nation has to contemplate on this issue and should
bring a positive change.
Ghandhiji stated that
the heart of India
lies in villages. We can strive an overall development of India by
peeling off the regional disparity. We can bridge the gap between the have and
the have-nots by focusing on overall promotion of industrialization everywhere.
Why this answer a
perfect and precise one.
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It is a relevant subject.
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Explanation is given in a logic manner
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Each paragraph highlights specific issues.
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Vocabulary is of an academic standard.
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Examples, reasons and remedial measures have
manifested well.
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The topic promotes arguments and contentions.
Analyzing paragraph 1 :
Growth of a country
depends on its economy which is constituted by many factors. Industrialization
is one of the components which shape the economy of any nation. In the current
scenario, it is encompassed by Globalization, Privatization and Liberalization
which are inevitable to promote good and rapid economical growth. Some people
on the contrary have the opinion that this promotes regional inequality
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The paragraph is brief and precisely defines the
topic.
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We see an argument in the first paragraph
itself.
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Paragraph reflects the whole topic.
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The reader is introduced to both sides of the
argument.
Analyzing paragraph 2:
The term Industrialization
signifies the birth and growth of industries in any premises with the support
of the government or any other institution. It brings a total alteration in the
society. It augments regional growth by providing more employment
opportunities, better amenities and standard of living to the local people. The
reputation and popularity acquired by china among the world nations is
literally the result o f Industrialization. I don’t think there is any
contradiction or contention in the statement that Industrialization promotes
economical growth.
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This paragraph clearly defines the term ‘Industrialization’
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It clearly underlines the writer’s opinion.
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Perfect example is given to vindicate the
writers argument.( The reputation and popularity acquired by china.)
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The writer support his claims by citing
reasons……( providing more employment opportunities, better amenities etc.)
Analysing paragraph 3:
Industrialization is obviously the cradle
for economic growth. On the contrary we have to accept the reality that it also
brings regional imbalance and disparity. Urbanization is the direct impact of
this. We see a spur in the growth of cities. People tend to reside in cities
because of better job opportunities and amenities. Today we see that
development and industrialization is just confined to cities. The growth of
village has stagnated due to rapid development in cities, deliberately ignoring
the village people. This leads to grave consequences like stagnation of economy
and stricken poverty. Every nation has to contemplate on this issue and should
bring a positive change.
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The flow of idea changes in this paragraph.
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Here the writer probes into another different
aspect of the topic.
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He tries to bring a comprehensive idea of the
topic.
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He also admits the claim raised by some section
of the society that ….(Urbanization and growth of cities as adverse impact of industrialization)
Analyzing paragraph 4 :
Ghandhiji stated that the
heart of India
lies in villages. We can strive an overall development of India by
peeling off the regional disparity. We can bridge the gap between the have and
the have-nots by focusing on overall promotion of industrialization everywhere.
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Here the writer gives solutions to
balance the arguments.
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Final paragraph gives a comprehensive outlook
with respect to the topic
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The word count is around 270 which is good.
How
I Developed This Answer
(Time Taken:10
minutes)
Introduction
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I read the question and identified the key
issues.
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I focused on the key words like Industrialization
and Regional Disparity
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I contemplated on the controversy in this topic.
The
first and the most relevant idea that I conceived with regard to the topic is that,
Industrialization is very vital for the promotion of any economy. It is an
absolute right statement .We can’t anticipate progress without the process of industrialization.
I would write the following summary notes on the test
booklet:
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Economical growth
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Job opportunities
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Better amenities
One of the ideas that came in to my mind is obviously
economical disparity. Although Industrialization promotes economy, regional
imbalance and Urbanization are the direct result of this.
I would write the following summary notes on the test
booklet:
I tried to bring a balance
between arguments for and against Industrialization and brought a view that
industrialization is very necessary.
- Bridge
the gap
- Overall
promotion of industralisation
